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Death

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There is no tranquility in Death
It drags on for eternity
With no hope for escape
No longer do you have freedom
Never again will you feel sunshine on your face
Death is dark
Death is cruel
A spiral of nothingness,
of emptiness
No one comes back
It is forever
Full of never ending pain
Pain of loss and suffering
Cherish your life
Live it with passion
Because eventually, we all float down here
Wrote this in English class, teacher put up words from the "UK Top 70 most beautiful words" and we had to choose at least six to use

I decided to twist it,
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Sorry I'm sooo late on commenting DX
I love all your poetry work, always feel all kinda of emotions with it. Your an amazingly stong poet\writer, writer.